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           The very point of sale
           The ve     ry   point of sale                        that having a clear objective can help shape a story. The
                                                                Green Sheet for example, publishes educational articles and
                                                                copywriting and has markedly different guidelines for
                                                                each. Contributing writers cover a range of topics in a non-
                                                                promotional way; advertisers produce content designed to
                                                                spark interest and attract new sales partners.
                                                                "If you create content and your intention is to get somebody
                                                                to click a link, to go to a specific page, to request information,
                                                                to fill out a form, to opt-in, to request a phone call, or to
        Unleash your inner                                      make a phone call, then all these things are copywriting,"
                                                                Edwards wrote, noting that copywriting is all about getting
        bestseller                                              to yes.


                                                                Know why people buy, he noted, while sharing the top 10
        By Dale S. Laszig                                       reasons he identified: to make money, save money, save
        DSL Direct LLC                                          time, avoid effort, escape pain, obtain comfort, achieve
                                                                greater results, gain praise, feel more loved, and increase
                 ennifer Egan had me from the title, "Facts Still   popularity or status. He suggested crafting questions
                 Exist," published Dec. 24, 2018, in Time Magazine.   around  these  motivations  such  as,  How  will  you  save
                                                                time with this solution? What tasks would this product or
                 The Pulitzer Prize winning author, and former
        J president of P.E.N. America, asserted that social     service eliminate? Then think of as many answers as you
                                                                can to get a sense of your target audience and their needs,
        media  platforms  are  oversimplified,  sensationalistic  and
        loaded  with  inaccuracies. "We need to write now,  write   he added.
        well  – tell the  truth  in  all  its messy  complexity," Egan   Simple language
        wrote.
                                                                Edwards advised resisting the urge to sound authoritative
        Egan's headline pulled me in because it was relatable. It   when you write promotional content, because no one wants
        reassured me, a trade journalist who chases statistics and   to be lectured. Try instead, he stated, to make your prospects
        data, that I can still do my job. Here are some thoughts on   and audience feel smart by making their challenges and
        writing  and  selling the  payments  industry's  big,  messy   opportunities the focal point of your presentation.
        story.
                                                                "Making it all about them means you avoid being cute,
        Strong headline                                         using sarcasm, inside jokes, or using anything that could

        Good strong headlines get more sales and click-throughs,   be misconstrued," he wrote. "You avoid trying to prove
        according to Jim Edwards, author of Copywriting Secrets,   how smart you are by using big words, industry jargon, or
        published by Author Academy Elite in 2018. He explained   acronyms you don't explain. All that does is confuse people
        that headlines begin the sales process by stopping people   and turn them off."
        in their tracks and getting their attention. A great headline
        with mediocre copy will outperform excellent copy with a   Someone who is confused will be unlikely to buy
        weak headline, he added.                                anything, Edwards noted, underscoring the need to be
                                                                crystal clear when communicating with people who may
        "If your headline sucks, nobody reads your sales letter,   feel scared, self-conscious or afraid of making the wrong
        nobody reads your ad, and nobody watches your video,"   decision. Improve your odds by communicating in simple,
        he wrote, noting that the purpose of a headline is to stop   understandable terms, and keep your thoughts well
        people from what they're doing and get them to start    organized and sequential, he added.
        reading or watching what you've put in front of them.   On point, on brand

        Good headlines, he added, attract your ideal audience by   How can brands stand out in a crowded digital marketplace?
        appealing  to  fears  or  desires  and  making  an  emotional   Edwards proposed that most people hardly pay attention
        connection. In fact, as he learned from personal experience,   to what they see or read and could use a good jolt. "Your job
        a great headline can catapult a project from obscurity to   is to shock them, so they stop what they're doing and pay
        profitability. "Just by changing a headline," he wrote, "I   attention to you," he wrote. "You do this with a shocking
        saved an entire project (and skyrocketed my business)."  statement or image."
        Clear objective                                         I can't help but wonder about the cumulative effect of all
                                                                these provocative statements and images. To Egan's point,
        Writing sales pitches requires a different focus and skill set   have we become desensitized to internet shock jocks and
        than writing educational articles, and I agree with Edwards
                                                                sensationalism? Do payments industry professionals
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